Thursday, January 28, 2016

Reading Notes for Tennyson



Tennyson’s In Memoriam, A. H. H.

Reading Notes

Tennyson’s poem consists of 131 sections, each section a lyric poem capable of being read on its own but also part of a larger movement or narrative. Given how quickly we are moving through even this shortened version of the poem, feel free to skim through parts to get a sense of the whole and read more deeply and carefully those sections that appeal to you. You might also find it helpful to focus on the following sections:

Sections 1-14, especially 6 (initial sorrow, despair, doubt, passivity, loss of meaning)
Sections 27, 28, and 30 (the first Christmas without Hallam)
Sections 54-56 (the so-called “evolution” lyrics) (see also 57 and 58 below)
Sections 78, 80 (the second Christmas without Hallam)
Sections 86, 89 (Nature, idyllic past, joy?)
Sections 95-96 (recovery? faith and doubt)
Sections 104-106 (the third Christmas without Hallam)
Section 108 (return to community?)
Sections 117-118 (time, types; responds to 55 and 56)
Sections 120, 123, 124, and epilogue (resolution?)

Key Missing Sections


                          57

Peace; come away: the song of woe
Is after all an earthly song:
Peace; come away: we do him wrong
To sing so wildly: let us go.


Come; let us go: your cheeks are pale;
But half my life I leave behind:
Methinks my friend is richly shrined;
But I shall pass; my work will fail.


Yet in these ears, till hearing dies,
One set slow bell will seem to toll
The passing of the sweetest soul
That ever look'd with human eyes.


I hear it now, and o'er and o'er,
Eternal greetings to the dead;
And `Ave, Ave, Ave,' said,
'Adieu, adieu,' for evermore.


                             58

In those sad words I took farewell:
Like echoes in sepulchral halls,
As drop by drop the water falls
In vaults and catacombs, they fell;


And, falling, idly broke the peace
Of hearts that beat from day to day,
Half-conscious of their dying clay,
And those cold crypts where they shall cease.


The high Muse answer'd: `Wherefore grieve
Thy brethren with a fruitless tear?
Abide a little longer here,
And thou shalt take a nobler leave.'

Format of the Midterm



English 468

Format of the Midterm

The midterm examination will consist of three sections. You will need a bluebook or several sheets of lined paper that can be stapled together. Questions will be limited to texts, authors and terms that have been discussed in class or assigned on the syllabus up to and including February 2. The exam is closed book with the exception that you can consult a print copy of Jane Eyre, though, doing so won’t be required. The midterm counts as 20% of your course grade.
Part I
20 Questions—0.5 point each (10 points possible)
The first section of the midterm will assess your knowledge of the literary texts, authors, and terms important to an understanding of the Victorian literature and culture. You can expect questions that will focus on the background to the period and literary terms and forms (as discussed in class and available for review in the period introduction in the Longman Anthology).
Part II
5 Passages—5 points each (25 points possible)
The second section of the midterm will assess your knowledge of the literary texts, authors and techniques important to an understanding of Victorian literature. You will be asked to identify five out of seven passages. For each identified passage, you will need to write the name of the author (1 point), the title of the text from which the passage was taken (1 point) and a brief paragraph (3 points) explaining what the passage tells us about the text.
Part III
1 Short Essay—15 points possible
The third section of the midterm will assess your ability to write a clear, detailed and coherent essay that responds to a specific topic. The essay topic will focus on Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre.
The following scoring guide will be used to assess your essay written for Part III of the exam:

15 -- Excellent: Fully and effectively developed on most issues; effectively organized; insightful and/or original argument; clearly and effectively written

14 -- Superior: Fully and effectively developed on most issues; effectively organized; clearly written

13 -- Solid: well developed on key issues; clearly organized; makes an argument


12 -- Adequate: developed on some issues, but some issues missing; organization might be mechanical; argument might be routine; language control might be an issue

11 -- Minimal: developed on some issues, but key issues missing; might be somewhat incomplete; simple organization or problems with organization; might not make an argument; language problems might confuse and/or distract

10 -- Weak: tends towards plot summary and simple character analysis; might be substantially incomplete; might be ineffectively organized or logically flawed; might have serious problems with expression

9 and below -- Inadequate: Miscontrues the question, mistaken or logically flawed; most key issues missing; might be unfocused and disorganized, or might have severe language problems

Monday, January 25, 2016

First Essay Assignment

First Paper Assignment

REVISED DUE DATE: Tuesday, February 9 at the beginning of class
Final Draft Due: Thursday, February 4 at the beginning of class

Essay Length: approx. 4 pages (1200-1500 words)

Getting Started

1. Read through all of the paper topics and spend some time planning a response to more than one. In other words, “try the topic on” to see how it fits. What text would you focus on? How does this text fit the topic? What are some of the complications that might arise from the use of this text, bearing in mind that complications can often be a source of the greatest interest for writer and reader?

2. Once you have selected a topic and the text that will be your focus, spend some time with the text. Reread it with the new perspective of the paper you plan to write. Be careful, though, not to simply reread it to find evidence to support your position. Instead be open to the possibility that you might find both confirming and contradictory evidence. Don’t dismiss the contradictory evidence. Keep track of it.

3. Look through your notes on the topic and the text and develop a preliminary thesis.

4. Write a draft (or drafts) of your paper. Find someone in class willing to look at your essay (offer to look at his or her in return). Be careful about relying on friends—you want good feedback that will help you revise your paper and make it better; you don’t want friendly comments like “It looks pretty good to me.” You can also visit the Writing Center at any stage of the process—when you are trying to find a topic, when you are developing possible responses to the topic, when you are developing a preliminary thesis, when you are drafting.

5. Be sure to proofread your essays carefully, and consider giving your paper to a friend or classmate for proofreading. Also read your paper out loud to yourself before completing a final draft—make sure it sounds like spoken English and not like paper-ese. Try for an easy, graceful, but not overly casual writing style; assume a reader who knows the text, but has not memorized every detail.

Some Resources to Consider for the First Three Topics

Definitions of "dramatic monologue"

A brief definition of the "dramatic monologue" from George Landow (http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/rb/dm1.html

Glenn Everett's more detailed discussion (linked also on Landow's page (http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/rb/dm4.html)

M. H. Abrams definition (quoted on Dino Felluga's course page) (http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~felluga/guide337.html#dramatic)



The Lady at her loom (Elizabeth Siddal)

"I am half-sick of shadows" (John William Waterhouse)
The Lady looks at Lancelot (Waterhouse)

"The mirror cracked from side to side"
William Holman Hunt (painting)
Hunt (engraving)

"Like some bold seer in a trance" (Waterhouse)

"Singing in her song she died"
John Atkinson Grimshaw
Arthur Hughes
Dante Gabriel Rossetti

Suggested Paper Topics

1. “The Lady of Shalott” was a popular subject for Victorian painters, among them William Holman Hunt and John William Waterhouse. A small black-and-white version of Hunt’s painting is reproduced alongside the poem in the Longman Anthology, and the Waterhouse painting is reproduced in the color plates section. There are several others of interest and both Hunt’s and Waterhouse’s are available online in larger formats and with greater detail. Find one of the “Lady of Shalott” paintings online and write an essay that explains how the painter has interpreted the poem. You will want to consider the choices the painter has made—what has been added or omitted? what has been highlighted or downplayed? Regardless of your strategy, you need to explore the details of both the painting and the poem and not merely list similarities and differences; instead use similarities and differences to make an argument about how the painter has chosen to represent (i.e. interpret) the scene from the poem and by extension the poem as a whole.

2. Robert Browning’s dramatic monologues invite us to piece together a “character” based on what the speaker says and on what has been “unsaid.” For instance, we can infer many details of the Duke of Ferrara’s character through his monologue and at times we might recognize that what the Duke tells us is misleading, deceptive, delusional, or maybe strategic. For this topic, study carefully one of the following Browning dramatic monologues: “The Bishop Orders his Tomb at Saint Praxed’s Church,” “Fra Lippo Lippi,” or “Andrea del Sarto.” Then write an essay that unravels the main character’s motivations and personality. What does this character want us to think about him, and what do we actually think?


3. In class we have discussed the qualities of a dramatic monologue with special attention to Browning’s use of this form. Consider Tennyson’s “Ulysses” to be a dramatic monologue in the style of Browning and write an essay in which you make an argument about the character of Ulysses that Tennyson reveals in that poem. What is the Ulysses of Tennyson’s poem like? Do we learn anything about him beyond what he tells us explicitly? How are we to react to him, and why?

4. Victorian poets were concerned with the problems of connection and communication between individuals. Focus on one poem and argue what position this poem takes on the importance and the possibility of connection.

5. Discuss the ways in which one of the authors we have read explores the function of art in the Victorian Era. What does the author in question define as “art”? What should it do? What should an artist do? Does (s)he have any moral imperatives? Any responsibilities to his or her public? How are these responsibilities shaped by (what the author defines as) uniquely Victorian issues? In other words, how does the author define art and its role in his or her era?

Notes
  • You do not need to do any research for this assignment.
  • Use MLA in-text (parenthetical) citation form. If you use editions besides the Longman Anthology of British Literature, Volume 2B, please include a “Works Cited” page in MLA format.
  • For formatting information, see the course syllabus.